| M 17-Nov: Gertrude Stein Intro + excerpts (1150-74): from The Making of Americans and from Tender Buttons (Michelle Bishop). |
 |
W 19-Nov: Essay Workshop: Using Sources. (see instructions and post here)
– Class notes (.doc)
– Review: Essay 1 notes (see especially: 20-Oct & 22-Oct notes)
F 21-Nov Independent Essay Work: Thesis. (see instructions and post here)
M 24-Nov Peer Review (3-4pg draft).
W 26-Nov Due: Essay 2 (2000-2500 words; min. 1 scholarly source)
– submit on e-learning as rich-text format document (.rtf).
– extra credit: “process memo” (1 page min/max; cover sheet)
F 28-Nov No Classes (Thanksgiving)
 |
 |
|
| George Braque: Woman with a Guitar (1913) | Juan Gris: Still Life with Fruit Dish and Mandolin (1919) |
 |
| Pablo Picasso: Le guitariste (1910) |
W 19-Nov: Essay Workshop: Using Sources. (see instructions and post here)
W 19-Nov: By class-time, please post (for additional participation credit):
- Bibliographic Entry for 1 Article from Academic Journal (or other scholarly source); MLA-style citation (required)
Review style guide for correct format; e.g. Purdue OWL
(Follow “An Article from an Electronic Subscription Service”)
- Summary of article’s main points; author’s argument or interpretation (1-2 sentences)
- Relevance and rationale; specifically how using in essay, to support analytic thesis. (most important aspect of assignment)
F 21-Nov: Essay Workshop: Thesis (see instructions and post here)
F 21-Nov: By class-time, please post (for additional participation credit):
- Revised project: (more-developed) topic, issue, context, and (imagined) argument.
- Revised analytic thesis statement; (1-2 sentences).
– 1) literary analysis? (interpretation, critical “angle” on novel)
– 2) tentative argument (“working thesis”):
phrasing analysis as claim to argue, support, and discuss.
- Brief description how using article as support evidence, integrated within discussion. (1-2 sentences)
- Self-critique, using questions below.
- Specific Qs, concerns, difficulty. (at least one issue)
Additionally, read and reply to one classmate’s entry,
(in sequence; without neither repetition nor omission; i.e. everyone receives reply).
- relevant context and critical issue addressed?
- clear and effective thesis, phrased as analytic assertion?
- identifies significance of analysis, with clear claim to argue/support?
(ask whether 1) claim? or descriptive? 2) “arguable” ? in order to persuade readers to recognize analysis, with compelling point about the novel?)
- avoids summary or self-evident (literal) statements about text?
- suggests strong potential for argument (to extent that you can tell), in presenting analysis?
- evokes any concerns about effectiveness? (general)
Dictionary.com Word of the Day for Sunday, November 16, 2008
adduce \uh-DOOS; -DYOOS\, verb:
to offer as a reason in support of an argument; bring up as an example; give as proof or evidence; cite
By: Gary Hink on November 16, 2008
at 4:19 pm
Lester, Cheryl. “As they Lay Dying: rural depopulation and social dislocation as a structure of feeling.” The Faulkner Journal. 21.1-2 (Fall 2005): p28. Literature Resource Center. Gale. UNIV OF FLORIDA. 17 Nov. 2008
.
Summary:
This article emphasizes the story’s illustration of the decline of social identities and formations for the Bundren familiy and others in similar situations throughout the rural South. The author also illustrates the social transformation’s potential effects on the people of the South.
Relavance:
This article will help in supplementing examples of resistance to change by the Bundren family. The article provides information on the historical change that was occurring at the proposed time of the story and gives light to the way many people of the time were mentally and physically handling their changing environments.
By: jenlouise on November 18, 2008
at 10:36 am
Kerr, Frances. “Feeling `half feminine’: Modernism and the politics of emotion in The Great Gatsby..” American Literature 68(1996): 405-427.
This article gives an insight to the emotional psychology of F Scott Fitzgerald when he was writing The Great Gatsby. It primarily tracks the life of Nick Carraway through all his encounters with the different social classes of East Egg and West Egg. The focus is primarily on Nick’s struggle with gender identity and sexuality.
This article will help provide a background to Fitzgerald’s thought process when writing this novel. It will also be key in providing examples of gender confusion throughout the novel.
By: megben on November 18, 2008
at 6:07 pm
Lunde, Arne, and Anna Westerstahl Stenport. “Helga Crane’s Copenhagen: Denmark, Colonialism, and Transnational Identity in Nella Larsen’s Quicksand.” Comparative Literature 60 (Summer 2008): 228-243. Academic Search Premier. U of Florida Lib., Gainesville, FL. 18 Nov 2008 .
Summary: The authors of this article argue that Larsen intentionally presents Helga as a quiet and silenced character to reflect the silenced history of Denmark’s West Indies salve-trade. Helga’s experience in Denmark is not a “fairy-tale” as she imagines it will be, but is filled with implied racism and sexism.
Relevance: This article is not directly relevant to my thesis (since I am focusing on Helga’s experience in Harlem), but many of her experiences in Copenhagen are related to her experiences in Harlem. Much of what the authors say about Copenhagen can be extended to Harlem.
By: averytm on November 18, 2008
at 9:08 pm
Rayson, Ann. “Foreign Exotic or Domestic Drudge? The African American Woman in ‘Quicksand’ and ‘Tar Baby’.” General OneFile(1998): 87-98.
The author discusses Helga Crane and Jadine Childs, (from Tar Baby), as women who both suffered sexual, racist decisions. Both women are forced to make choices on who to love. For example, each is courted by a white male and a black male. At the time of both stories, white males were more prominent and wealthy, while black men were looked down upon. The decision is difficult to make because African-Americans “disowned” other black women who chose to live with and eventually marry a protestant white male. Stereotypes and sexuality are main topics that Rayson discusses.
The relevance is not related to my thesis exactly, but I might be able to tie it in with my idea of the “money” expense made by Helga Crane. The “money” could result in trying to fit in with the white society, which could therefore go along with “stereotypes” made by Rayson. To be honest, I may “tweek” my thesis, if you will, to a better understanding made by Rayson. She has allowed me to open up a bigger picture on stereotypes and sexuality during rough times through slavery.
By: kjack on November 18, 2008
at 11:10 pm
Trask, David F. “A Note on Fitzgerald’s The Great Gatsby.” University Review 33.3 (Mar. 1967): 197-202. Literature Resource Center. U of Florida Lib. 18 Nov 2008.
Summary: This article has two major points: the American Dream and Gatsby’s pursuit of it. The description of the American Dream talks about where the idea came from and what it the accepted notion of it entails. The rest of the article focuses on Gatsby’s pursuit of the American Dream, whether successful or unsuccessful.
Relevance: The first part of the essay is important because it will help me set a framework of what the American Dream is. While it is generally an accepted term, it is important that I let my reader know how I interpret it so they may better understand my essay. The rest of the essay will be used as support in my argument on whether Fitzgerald depicts the flaws in the American Dream. Gatsby is the most notable character obsessed with pursuing this idea, so it is important to relate my argument back to his actions. The article has specific instances that will guide my discussion: such as Gatsby’s death, his relationship with Daisy, and the changing of his name from Jay Gatz.
By: ericgunther on November 18, 2008
at 11:32 pm
Phelan, James. “Distance, Voice, and Temporal Perspective in Frederic Henry???s Narration: Successes, Problems, and Paradox.” New Essays on A Farewell to Arms. (1990) : 53-73.
Phelan expertly describes the changing attitude depicted in Hemingway’s main character in A Farewell to Arms. Through Frederic Henry’s tone and voice, he first comes off as someone who lacks sincerity and works only for his own benefit. However, as the narrative goes on, he is greatly affected by the devastating war and his new love. These recent changes in Henry’s life impinge on his attitude and outburst of dialogue. Phelan also comments on the distinction between Hemingway himself and Henry the narrator. He notes on their many similarities, since this work is reflective from Hemingway’s own WWI experience. However, Phelan picks up on many conflicting characteristics displayed by Henry that seem outside the idea of Hemingway. Frederic Henry’s strong-willed character undergoes many personal battles that take affect on his outlook. This work supports my analytic thesis because is addresses the issues concerning Frederic Henry. I plan on analyzing his character change through WWI and Catherine Barkley. War and love are contrasting emotions that drive Henry to become someone completely different than as he started, despite his actions in the ending scene.
By: katetyler on November 18, 2008
at 11:39 pm
Davis, Andrew. “Constructing Identity:Race,Class,Gender, and Sexuality in Nella Larsen’s ‘Quicksand’ and ‘Passing’.”p.4-30.2006.digitalcommon.concoll.edu.Retrieved November 17,2008.
In this article, the author discusses the characters in larsen’s novels and how their identities are affected by their race, class,and gender.For example, the author discusses how Helga Crane is objectified as a result of her race which results in the unclearness of her presumed identity.
This article is relevant to my thesis because it explores African Americans,specifically Helga Crane’s character and how their identities are constructed. In addition it explores social forces that help mode and create their identities.
By: miamij on November 18, 2008
at 11:41 pm
Hayes, Elizabeth. “Tension Between Darl and Jewel.” The Southern Literary Journal 24.2 (Spring 1992): p49. .
The main point of the article is to show how the tension and fighting between Darl and Jewel help propel the story forward. It also focuses on their relationships with Addie and how that affects them both.
This article is relevant because it discusses why Darl and Jewel act the way they do. I helps to support my thesis that it is possible to have different views regarding the death of Addie.
By: jjswank28 on November 19, 2008
at 2:22 am
Dilbeck, Keiko. “Symbolic representation of identity in Hurston’s Their Eyes Were Watching God.” The Explicator. 66.2 (Winter 2008): p102. Literature Resource Center. Gale. UNIV OF FLORIDA. 19 Nov. 2008 .
This article is about the development of black women’s “psyche” based on the character of Janie and the symbols that represent her. He says that in the novel the “Pear tree,” “the mule,” and “Janie’s hair” contribute to the development of her identity as a women and an African American with the pear tree symbolizing her sexuality, the hair her race, and the mule her with women’s roles and gender entrapment.
This article will help me with my paper because these symbols will help me to demonstrate the social effects on Janie’s character and how these aid/inhibit her in the formation of her unique identity. Each symbol seems to be socially constructed or ruined by the social aspects of her life.
By: stephdull on November 19, 2008
at 2:24 am
Trask, David F. “A Note on Fitzgerald’s The Great Gatsby.” University Review. 33.3 ( 1967, Mar. ): 197-202. Rpt. in Novels for Students. Ed. Diane Telgen. Vol. 2. Detroit: Gale, 1998. 197-202. Literature Resource Center. Gale. UNIV OF FLORIDA. 19 Nov. 2008
The article describes how America during the 1920s did not embody the American dream. It states that the time for the American dream had long since past. It relates Gatsby’s failure to the Americans dream’s nonexistence.
This article will enable me to provide evidence to support my claims that the Great Gatsby is a novel critiquing the American Dream. This supports my still-in-progress thesis of Fitzgerald disproving of the American Dream.
By: aml2070scoma on November 19, 2008
at 2:28 am
Knudsen, Janice. “The tapestry of living: a journey of self-discovery in Hurston’s Their eyes are watching god”. CLA Journal v. 40(December 1996) p.214-29. Academic Search Premier. U of Florida Lib., Gainesville, FL. 18 Nov 2008 .
This article is about the theme of self-discovery of Janie that continues to recur throughout Their Eyes are Watching God. Through her relationships with men and her community she discovers her true identity.
This article will help give examples of Janie’s self- discovery and identity that I am going to focus on. It will provide another angle or view than I was planning on just focusing on. It will also be a key in providing examples of Janie’s relationship with her community.
By: chell87 on November 19, 2008
at 9:05 am
Motley, Warren. “From Patriarchy to Matriarchy: Ma Joad’s Role in The Grapes of Wrath” American Literature 54 (1982): 397-412. JSTOR. U of Florida Lib., Gainesville, FL. 18 Nov 2008 .
Summary: Motley argues for the importance of Ma Joads role in leading the family on their journey and discusses from a critical perspective her motives and methods for leading and how the change in power structure came about.
Relevance: The article relates directly to the focus of my thesis, the motivation of the joad family to continue, by looking at how power shifted from the male side of the family to the female as their conditions worsened. This article gives direct support to my analysis of Ma Joad in this regard.
By: spencerphillips on November 19, 2008
at 10:27 am
Project:
In my essay I will argue that many of the actions and perceived personality traits of the characters are related to the social anxiety of the time. Many farmers in their situation were moving off their land and into the city and this change was accompanied by many different feelings.
Thesis:
The 1930s in the rural South was characterized by farmers leaving their land for towns and cities. This change, along with outward resistance, was often accompanied by fear, anxiety, obssessiveness, and much discomfort. I will use the eldest living Bundrens, Darl, Cash, and Anse, to display this resistance.
Article Usage:
I will use my article as a supplement to several sections of my paper including the parts about William Faulkner himself, the family unit, and Darl.
Questions:
Is my thesis clear? Does it sound “argueable”?
By: jenlouise on November 20, 2008
at 3:14 pm
I have struggled in developing a thesis because I am overwhelmed by all the different things to talk about in Quicksand, and I realize that I will have to be more specific eventually. I plan to focus on Helga’s time spent in Harlem (both before and after her visit to Copenhagen). I will tentatively incorporate some historical information about 1920s Harlem in order to broaden Helga’s experience to a larger crowd, and better understand Larsen’s intent.
Thesis: Throughout Quicksand, Helga Crane looks to geography as a means of solving her lack of identity. Her directionless path leads her to live in Harlem for two periods of her life, and here superficial amusements such as Anne’s luxurious lifestyle, glamorous mixed-race parties, and a religious experience at the mission contribute to Helga’s lack of self-discovery.
Articles: One of my articles discusses Helga’s experience in Copenhagen, which resonates with some of her experiences in Harlem, such as her love for self-display. The other article describes Helga’s psyche by focusing on her sexual repression. I found this focus on her sexual repression to be very interesting, but am unsure about how to incorporate it. Nonetheless, this article presents relevant issues about Helga’s struggle in identifying with black culture.
Questions: I guess simply discussing Anne’s lifestyle, glamorous parties, and Helga’s “religious” experience is too explicit/literal, but how do I focus more on the implicit in the chapters on Harlem? I was going to discuss Helga’s constant contradictions in relation to each of the above, but is that to explicit?
By: averytm on November 20, 2008
at 9:17 pm
* I’m focusing on society’s role in Janie’s transformation in “Their Eyes Were Watching God.” I’m also going to tie in specific people such as her first two husbands and her grandmother and how they subjugated her but also how they represented the ideals of the society at the time place where they come from. Instead of seeing Janie’s transformation as one of chance and simply something that happened a she moves from one person and place to another, I am arguing that her transformation and her ultimate happiness is a direct result of society pushing her away rather than bending her to their will as they would have hoped. I am going to use the article I posted before mostly to demonstrate the societies ideals which the writer of the article discusses using the symbolism in the novel. I am also going to use an article on feminism in the book to back up my ideas on the kind of transformation that she is making as well as, maybe, some of Hurston’s ideas on feminism etc if it fits.
* Thesis: In Zora Neale Hurston’s “Their Eyes Were Watching God,” the main character Janie is strongly affected by the society around her, and it is because of these ideals and pressures of the societies, as well as certain individuals, that ultimately results in Janie’s own transition toward feminism and independence. Society continually attempts to strip Janie of her best attributes, her ability to love, care, and her humanity. The strength and determination of her character is illustrated through her self-preservation through all of her trials and tribulations.
*My questions wuld have to be if my thesis is argumentitive enough and if now what you would sugest to make it more so… and to anybody thats read the book if what im disscussing is viable and not to obvious i think its hard for me to tall in this book what is obvious to all readers and what isnt…i think her transformatin is kndof obvious bt not nessesarily the process cause it could be a result of a couple of different things.
By: stephdull on November 20, 2008
at 10:18 pm
Project: My topic for this essay is the “American Dream” as seen in The Great Gatsby. The American Dream is the notion that America is the land of opportunities and anyone, even if they come from a poor background, can climb the social latter to “success.” I think that Fitzgerald’s work shows that this idea, while attainable in a superficial aspect, is not fulfilling. I am going to argue that his work presents the American Dream as something that seems realistic, but when you look closer you see that even this rich class has their problems.
Thesis: In F. Scott Fitzgerald’s work, The Great Gatsby, Jay Gatsby is working toward what he considers the ideal social distinction, the American Dream. It is during this pursuit that we see this idealistic notion is truly unattainable and the American Dream is a flawed image.
Evidence: One of my articles talks a lot about the American Dream and where it came from. This will help me support my view of the American Dream when I present it to my readers, and ensure that they understand the context in which I will use the term. It also gives specific instances where the author feels the American Dream has its flaws, as seen in the The Great Gatsby, that will be used as evidence for my points.
Questions: I am not exactly sure if my thesis fits under the idea of modernism as we discussed in class. Also, I am not sure if what I am arguing is specific enough that I will be able to make very unique points. Is this argument too left-brained in the sense that much of my discussion may be referring to specific instances and not as much how they relate to a modernist term?
RESPONSE to JEN: I think the context of this issue is addressed well. As I Lay Dying is a good source to use, especially because we get to see in the minds of so many characters, so it will do a good job of presenting a diverse view of what society may have felt during the time.
I think your thesis is clear in the sense that I know what your topic is about. It has the potential to be arguable, but I think they way you have it write now it seems a little ambiguous. I am not exactly sure what you mean by “fear, anxiety, obssessiveness, and much discomfort.” Perhaps if you picked one term and expanded on that, it might be easier to make your argument.
By: ericgunther on November 20, 2008
at 11:12 pm
Response to Eric:
I think the “American Dream” es extremely relevant to the discussed modernism. The time period we are discussing is when the American dream became attainable for so many more Americans. With more jobs and more opportunity people were encouraged to buy houses and cars. The “white picket fence” became a reality for millions of people. This is a great topic in the discussion of modernism and I think your article on where the American Dream came from will be very helpful to you.
By: jenlouise on November 20, 2008
at 11:28 pm
It is difficult to pin-point a specific subject on Quicksand, but the idea or criteria I have most heavily spoken upon is one of Helga Crane’s spending issues. However, I must admit that the sexuality that I found throughtout articles intrigues me because I feel it may relate to the way Crane spends her money.
As for the thesis, Helga Crane obviously focuses her time on spending money and making new friends. Perhaps this spending and extreme decision-making result in the way she decides how to process her next move, meaning she lives her life to please others through extravagent gifts and pleasures.
With using one of the articles found by Rayson, I can find evidence that Helga Crane and other women of the time have found “white protestant men” to be prominent in their lives, thus, making the African-American women feel inferior. Continuing to use money in order to “show off” only offers the idea that Crane is making herself feel better and higher through a society with more money.
However, I am concerned that my argument will not explain enough for the essay at hand. How may I find enough information to support my argument or is my argument even capable?
To Avery’s Response: I enjoy your topic and cannot agree enough with what you think about Helga’s experience. Your thesis seems thorough in the fact that you understand the material, but as with the same with me, you must expand your issue because I think that Helga’s geography might not get her as far as you would like. However, I do realize that you will discuss her emotions during this transformation, to which I believe will be excellent for your discussion.
Don’t stray for your point as I often do, but keep with the articles that stick to your strong idea of her geography and why she has chosen that location. I admire your thesis and look up to such an idea. Keep searching for specific aritcles or your argument will drown.
By: kjack on November 21, 2008
at 3:36 am
Project-For this essay I am attempting to argue the analyze the effect that “Double Consciousness”, a theory by W.E.B Dubois has on African Americans. I will also argue the effect that “Double Consciousness” has on Helga Crane throughout ‘Quicksand’.
Thesis-’Quicksand’ demonstrates how “Double Consciousness” can have a strong effect on the lives of African Americans.Helga Crane struggles with every aspect of her life from finding an identity to struggling with her sexuality and finally finding true hapiness. This a result of “Double Consciousness” where one sees themselves through the eyes of others, and measures their worth by a heavily rascist society. Helga struggles with this throughout the novel,being mixed race, and living in America at a time when being Black was like a curse.
The articles I have focus on the theory of Double Consciousness and issues of race in “Quicksand”. I have not yet found an article that embodies my argument. I am looking for an article that will help me suport my thesis with relevant examples which I have not yet found.
Is my thesis argumentative, does my project meet the criteria for the assignment?
By: miamij on November 21, 2008
at 9:39 am
In response to Steph: I think your thesis is argumentative and perfect for the novel. I think you get the feeling that your topic is obvious because it is focused on one of the major themes of the novel but nonetheless it is still worthy of discussion.As long as you introduce fresh ideas to your argument, I think it’s great.
By: miamij on November 21, 2008
at 10:25 am
A Farewell to Arms, by: Ernest Hemingway.
Frederic Henry first appears as an insincere and self conscious character. Like Nick, from Fitzferald’s The Great Gatsby, Frederic Henry keeps his distance and does not reveal many emotional outburts towards much. In the beginning of the narrative, he reflects mainly upon the weather and its changing seasons. He notes how these changes affect the war and the residents of towns. The changing of the weather and the seasons depict Hemingway’s style as Henry notes on the color of scenery often throughout. Hemingway’s own characteristics are very present throughout the story. As the novel goes on, however, Henry’s mood changes. This is helped by two things: The people he is surrounded by and the effect of the war. The Priest is a minor character that I believe to be Henry’s only real friend. Compared to Catherine, he is level headed and provides wonderful insight into life and love. Catherine is the first person Henry shows true affection for. Knowing nothing about his family or background, Henry’s actions are debated as genuine or not. Catherine Barkley is sweet and sentimental which is in great contrast to the bitterness of the war. Henry is loved by Catherine and experiences loss through the war. Both of these instances are new occurrences for Frederic Henry, the heavy drinker with sober-minded thoughts.
Thesis: Frederic Henry shows great similarities and differences to Ernest Hemingway in his own narrative, A Farewell To Arms. With this relevance to Hemingway, Henry shows progress as a detached character by becoming more emotional and sincere. This change is evident in Hemingway’s narrative due to the advancements of World War I and new relationships with other characters that force him to act outside of his comfort zone. Frederic Henry’s strength and compassion are the two things he develops in this story, despite his actions in the last scene.
Articles: One of my articles discusses the relevance of Henry to Hemingway. This is useful and choosing to write a little bit about this like you mentioned in your critique.
In response to Eric: I like the idea of the “ideal social distinction.” This is relevant to our discussions on modernism and I think this is a great topic. Jay Gatsby is a great character to analyze and find a lot of insight on. You have the right focus to connect the theme of The Great Gatsby and society then and today.
By: katetyler on November 21, 2008
at 10:58 am
Project: The joad family, as a collective, remains motivated to search for prosperity
because of a desire to remain united.
Thesis: Throughout The Grapes of Wrath, the condition of the Joad family deteriorates as they
attempt to cope with the economic climate of the dust bowl; however, they are, collectively,
able to remain motivated in their search for subsistence because of a need for family unity.
The scholarly article i have chosen describes how Ma Joad becomes the leader of the family and
discusses her motives. I am going to extend the analysis of her motives to the rest of the “collective”
in order to see how they relate and to argue that they all fall under the idea of family unity.
I feel that while my thesis is argumentitive, I am not sure if my mention of the
families “condition” qualifies as summary so I may need to revise that once more.
Additionally, I am slightly concerned that if i do not address the members of the family
that desert properly, my argument will be weakened. Perhaps there are some strategies
I should utilize to ensure that i dont fall into that trap.
In response to Kate:
In your first sentence it is hard to tell whose narrative The Farewell to Arms is,
since both names are mentioned. Your argument is solid but might also be slightly
ambiguous as it is stated now. Very descriptive project.
By: spencerphillips on November 21, 2008
at 11:24 am
In response to Kaley:
I think your topic is very interesting and definitely valid. Helga is consumed with consumerism, and I think obtaining these pretty things (dresses, purses, etc) make her feel worthy and admired by the rest of society. She enjoys self-display, but struggles with its implications because it reduces her to a primitive being. Some of the articles I have read suggest that she interprets this admiration to be a deeper understanding of her feelings and struggles, when really it is mostly a superficial admiration. I don’t know how relevant this is to your thesis, but it’s interesting how her materialism has implications for her desire to be understood and admired. I also like the part about Helga’s “extreme decision-making.” Her decisions are always sudden and rash, and she doesn’t give much thought to her next action. She is impulsive, especially when she wakes up one morning in Harlem and can’t decide whether she should sail back to Copenhagen or marry Mr. Pleasant Green: two completely different decisions that do not resemble each other in the least. She is always looking to re-channel her thoughts and desires into something more socially acceptable, and her consumerism and rash decisions reflect this struggle. Your idea about trying to fit in with white society is also a good idea. I would just try to discuss the significance and implications of her consumerism and decisions.
By: averytm on November 21, 2008
at 11:45 am
I plan on analyzing the role that gender played in The Great Gatsby. In particular I want to focus on Nick and his view of Gatsby. Throughout the novel Gatsby’s masculinity is questioned particularly by the elite and I want to expand upon the social discourse that ensued.
Thesis In F. Scott Fitzgerald’s The Great Gatsby, gender roles are used to define Gatsby’s life and the lavish lifestyle he tries to live. The beliefs of the conflicting mind of the narrator Nick are used to portray of the varying amounts masculinity that is exhibited by Gatsby.
My scholarly article focuses on Nick and his portrayal of gender roles as well as Fitzgeralds views on gender. I have not yet found an article about the masculinity/femininity of Gatsby but hope to find one to provide more supporting argument.
Is my thesis to vague? Does it provide a good argument? I am worried about spending too much time writing about the obvious and not focusing on the argument.
By: megben on November 21, 2008
at 1:04 pm
In response to Avery: I very much liked your thesis about Quicksand and Helga Cranes use of geography and I couldn’t agree more. Helga is certainly an interesting character in that she ultimately has not identity I would try not to focus on the obvious and explore the contradictions that you talked about.
By: megben on November 21, 2008
at 2:13 pm
I apologize for the lateness. I was not aware that there was a time-specific deadline, and I just checked my e-mail a few minutes ago.
Revised project: My topic is about the American Dream, and whether or not it still exists. The issue, as inferred by me through Fitzgerald’s text, is that the “American Dream” is dead and unattainable. To argue this, I will be looking closely at figure and collectivity. The figure will more than likely be the imagery of the green light as well as the eyes of billboard. The collectivity will refer to the audience, and to the fact that the American Dream is (was) applicable to not just a few, but the whole country.
- Revised analytic thesis statement: Fitzgerald uses figure and collectivity to prove that the American Dream is dead, and that those seeking it will inevitably fail.
- Brief description how using article as support evidence, integrated within discussion: The article I chose depicts the nature of the American Dream and how Fitzgerald views the American Dream. The author of the article goes on to write that Fitzgerald clearly did not view the American Dream optimistically, which I will integrate into my essay.
- Self-critique, using questions below. Specific Qs, concerns, difficulty. (at least one issue): Before I write a full essay through the use of figure, I suppose I should ask if that is the intended procedure (though this would be better suited for an e-mail).
By: aml2070scoma on November 21, 2008
at 4:34 pm
In response to Spencer,
If I recall correctly, there are a good number of Joads that leave, so, as you mentioned, it will be necessary to argue that the ones that did leave, left for a reason that does not hurt your argument. Also, I believe I recall that one of the members of the Joad family didn’t want Jim Casey to come with them in the beginning of the novel, but he was eventually considered to be part of their family. That might be useful somewhere. Or I am remembering the book incorrectly. One of those two.
By: aml2070scoma on November 21, 2008
at 4:38 pm
My project will now focus on the relationship between Darl and Jewel and how their interactions propel the story forward. The relationship between Darl and Jewel is a complex one. While Darl seems to understand Jewel, almost all of his sections and thoughts seem to end up on the subject of his brother Jewel. I will be turning my focus to how Darl is obsessed with Jewel. My working thesis will be arguing that without the differences between Darl and Jewel, the story would not have been able to function. Their constant quarrels are what created and encouraged many of the unfortunate situations to happen. The article will be used to find instances where Darl and Jewel have had their “fights”. It will also be used to support the fact that Darl is so obsessed with his brother Jewel.
Is this argument good enough for me to get a paper from?
By: jjswank28 on November 22, 2008
at 1:18 am
In response to Megan: I think that your idea for your paper is a good one but you should try to narrow your focus a little more. It might be too vague and might not be very arguable if it is too vague. If you find a more specific question you should be fine.
By: jjswank28 on November 22, 2008
at 1:27 am
Response to JJ: I think its a good argument as long as there is enough to write 6 pages on. I like your idea i think its unique and as long as you approach it the right way and stay away from summarizing it could develop nicely. Make sure u make your thesis an argument though, cause i dont think you wrote your actual thesis here? Also make sure you clearly state the outcome of those fights between the two..ie why they are significant!
By: stephdull on November 22, 2008
at 2:55 pm
“self-critique of your new thesis”
Fitzgerald uses the figure of image through color to convey the idea that the American Dream, however possible it may seem, is nonexistent.
This is my new thesis, though I can’t say it’s much different than the previous one (though I guess a little more refined). I left out collectivity to solely focus on image as a figure (specifically colors). It seems like a good choice to make because I clear away any confusion I may have caused by switching between the two points. The only downside is that there is only so much color in the novel (seemingly just a little more than enough for me to meet the requirement).
The thesis is fairly concise and to the point (though I think that’s the point of a thesis?), but if necessary I could indulge and little and expand it.
By: aml2070scoma on November 24, 2008
at 3:49 am
Despite the death and departure of several members of the Joad family in John Steinbeck’s The Grapes of Wrath, it is apparent that they find a way to cope with their hardship and motivation to continue on their migration. Even while their condition deteriorates, they continue to struggle on a quest for subsistence, a result of their need for unity that is evidenced by the actions of the individuals that make up their collective family unit.
This revised thesis is relavent and assertive, it is arguable and i feel it does not summarize the text. My only concern is that it should be rephrased to be more concise. Also, my mention of a collective might not be necessary in the thesis statement. Hopefully my method of analyzing the characters actions is a good approach, something i will ask about in class
By: spencerphillips on November 24, 2008
at 9:50 am
Helga Crane’s reckless decision-making affected her life in the way she carries herself, thus resulting in living only for others through extravagent spending and fancy possessions.
My revised thesis is different from my first, but still could use some help and extra detail. I feel as though it may not explain my argument very well, thus resulting in adding a more concise description in order to make my argument complete. I’m hoping that whoever reviews my paper will have suggestions on how to improve this.
By: kjack on November 24, 2008
at 11:06 am
Helga looks to geography as a means of solving her lack of identity. Her directionless path leads her to live in Harlem for two periods of her life, where she partakes in superficial amusements with the black race as a means of identifying with an important part of her ancestry. Anne’s luxurious lifestyle, a desire for admiration, and her bodily motion at the jazz club and the mission contribute to Helga’s lack of self-discovery in Harlem.
My revised thesis still doesn’t seem arguable enough to me. I like that I have 3 support topics which I can organize my paper around, but I think I need to make my thesis more assertive.
By: averytm on November 25, 2008
at 2:33 pm
I awake with the feeling of restlessness knowing today is an important day, I look around and all I see is darkness. Realizing it is fruitless to try and sleep anymore I hop out of bed and start to get ready for the biggest day of my life. As I make my way to the shower I curse that damn ledge as I stub my big toe for the billionth time. Feeling fresh and smelling of my new body wash, strawberries n cream I decide this day cannot be grand without the start of newly made coffee. The answering machine is blinking and I quickly forget about the coffee “ hey hun its mom thought I’d check on you this morning see how your doing on your big day, I’ll be by to pick you up in a half hour love you”
Well I don’t have time for coffee and my stomachs in knots anyway so I hurriedly get dressed. Once in the car I think over the day ahead of me, I can’t believe it’s finally happening I’ve waited and planned for a whole year I feel giddy. Upon entering the salon I smell a mix of coffee, shampoo and female perfume along with the usual female chatter. As I make my way to the salon chair I notice a few happy, envious and knowing smiles. After having my hair pulled, pinned, and played with the real fun starts, red, gold, silver, pink, black all is applied in circles, dashes, lines and shadows to my face. Time stands still as I become like my favorite Barbie I always played with. The last and final preparation is shimming my way into a gown made just for me. I’ve never felt so alive and as pretty as I do now, donning on my dress makes my Cinderella dream come true.
As I await walking down the aisle I take a picture of all of my surroundings, the smell of fresh roses in my hand, my two sisters standing quietly behind me, whispers behind the door I am about to enter, butterflies in the pit of my stomach, and my dad staring proudly down at me with his arm wrapped in mine. And then its time, the solid wood doors open and the shining light and decorations fill the room, now its time to walk, I feel temporally paralyzed and stuck in place. I have waited my whole life for this moment and I can’t move, I feel overwhelmed and panicked everyone’s eyes are on me waiting, expecting. And then I glance at the whole reason for me being here, my fiancé. His eyes show a certain softness and understanding; I fall in love with him all over again. My legs begin to move, I feel a force pulling me to him, the look in his eyes give me the strength. And once I’m standing by his side I know that the bond between us is special and I can’t imagine a greater joy than what I feel today. I will never have to worry about anything with him by my side, this is a moment I will remember for the rest of my life, my wedding day.
By: chell87 on December 10, 2008
at 4:36 pm
I really enjoyed reading your response. Even in such a short piece you managed to convey lots of feeling and emotion to the reader. I was able to pick up on the story right away and get captured in its detail. I really enjoyed the depictions of all the colors and different emotions like when you said “I notice a few happy, envious and knowing smiles… real fun starts, red, gold, silver, pink, black all is applied in circles, dashes, lines and shadows to my face.” Your style is very descriptive and I can pick up on your affect of excitement and joy. The way you built up the emotion is a key detail that spoke to me. It was like I knew something was coming but its never explicitly explained in the beginning. I could pick out the affect initially and enjoyed reading the rest of the response.
By: katetyler on December 10, 2008
at 8:13 pm